That night was flawless
I was with the guy I loved the most!
Wrapped in the arms of some one I loved to the core
I couldn’t have asked for anything more
There was love, passion and happiness all around me.
I felt content
My heart was brimming with love
I thought it had no space any more!
Until the next morning I realized
You came into existence
Something was growing inside of me...
Something was growing in me...
Something is growing from me
It’s a part of me.
The feeling is inexpressible
But my happiness is tangible
I feel each move you make
My love grows for you every moment am awake!!
My heart seemed to have doubled since
There’s a twinkle in my eye
At times there are tears of happiness
The joy I feel, only by thinking about you
A whole new life now within me
In a short while will be around me
I’ll love you and to the utmost for you show care
For you anything I’ll bear
I know your needs in and out
I hope it’ll be the same once you are out
Ill be there for always
Holding your hand, guiding you right
I wish I could cuddle you in my arms now
Look at you smile, look at you jump with joy
Play with your friend around.
When I come home after long working hours
You’ll greet me with your zillion dollar smile
And my problems will vanish miles and miles
Come to earth soon!
Am desperately waiting for you!!
Waiting to see if our relation
Would be same post-parturition!
Hi Jhanak, your blog was forwarded to me by Shalini. I am speechless!!! You write so beautifully, no words to describe your creativity. Most amazing is the way you have captured all feelimg in various phases and connection.
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Madhu
This one really turns out to be my favourite..! the feeling is so divine... so motherly n so true... speaks the heart n mind of a mother whuz gona carry the baby u've mentioned about! so fragile, so delicate, so lovely to feel.. the way u've talked about the love between the guy n d gal n the baby created as the token of their immortal relationship... the feeling truly comes out to be inexpressible...when a mother lives those 9 months like heaven despite so much of the pain d baby gives...d way she feels someone growing inside her womb, moving, kicking n turning around.. the way she feels all excited to grab her baby into her arms so tightly... cuddle n play with... n love like no one else...! hey sweetheart>>> its simply BEAUTIFUL..! It gives me a strength n a strong feeling to be a beautiful mother like u say...! u've just left me all flabbergasted.... even words cannot describe my appreciation for you!
ReplyDeleteHey Jhanak! Well, dunno how did I manage to read the complete thing... didnt realise wen it got over, wish if u cud hv written more...haha... I actually felt a movie was running in front of my eyes... The flow of the whole composition was so smooth n beautiful just like the rythm running through my heart, reminding me of the days i had already lived n the days that i am supposed to live..! You've portrayed the character of a baby, a kid, a teenager,a lady, a working woman and a mother so amazingly well,living up to the spirits of all the ages n experiences that a girl like you n me goes through.... Its like you've added life n speech to the words...for each line u wrote, i cud hear someone speaking the story of my life, the way it was, it is presently n the way its gona be...! I could feel the transition that my life has gone through... for times seemed to hv changed from my moments to be beautiful a long back... more beautiful for d ways i live them today n my desire to make them the most beautiful as i move ahead...! n its YOU who has said, displayed n portrayed it all so perfectly...! i can just say HATS OFF gal... hv gone gaga over ur writing skills n literary talents... n ur power of expression is simply fabulous..~ um so glad n proud to hv a friend like you who understands life n feelings so fantabulously well...! This work of yours is awesome n amazing n truly unforgettable my dear...!!! Just keep ur spirits up high! love you loads... n ya, i was just a friend n well wisher so far, but hv turned out to be ur fan n follower from now..
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n ya..~ those six spells left me "Spell"bound nearly six times..~~~ haha~ :P B):)
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